What I really like about these is that they are simple AND have a sense of space and depth, which I think is hard to accomplish. Especially with the first one, you have a foreground and background and the subject(s) go back into space very nicely. I like the top one much more compositionally but the bottom one is still interesting in a different sense. These are lovely!
I agree with Claire on the simplicity and sense of depth despite the simple lines and colors. One thing that bothered me a little bit was that both of them are pretty much in the middle of the page and even the water color strokes barely reach the edges of the paper and it feels very constrained and trapped. I love how the people in both paintings despite of how simple they are they totally have emotions and expressions so you get an idea of what the person's personality is like.
You have good space and emphasis. Everything is very nice to look and all tell their own stories. I especially like the simple backgrounds that just melt into the piece so easily. You are doing a very good job. A++
I love both pieces, the only thing is that, though it looks really cool, I thought that the one on the top was of a couple people flying in the sky, jumping from a plane. Really random, but I think this is because they are not grounded. I think they're sitting, but may be wrong. You just might want to make it a little more clear (sorry). But I really love this piece regardless. It's very funny and tells a story. Is the second piece about students raising their hands so that the teacher wil come up to them so they can check out her boobs? Both pieces are very funny and very Becky. Props, great job (again).
What I really like about these is that they are simple AND have a sense of space and depth, which I think is hard to accomplish. Especially with the first one, you have a foreground and background and the subject(s) go back into space very nicely. I like the top one much more compositionally but the bottom one is still interesting in a different sense. These are lovely!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Claire on the simplicity and sense of depth despite the simple lines and colors. One thing that bothered me a little bit was that both of them are pretty much in the middle of the page and even the water color strokes barely reach the edges of the paper and it feels very constrained and trapped. I love how the people in both paintings despite of how simple they are they totally have emotions and expressions so you get an idea of what the person's personality is like.
ReplyDeleteYou have good space and emphasis. Everything is very nice to look and all tell their own stories. I especially like the simple backgrounds that just melt into the piece so easily. You are doing a very good job.
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I love both pieces, the only thing is that, though it looks really cool, I thought that the one on the top was of a couple people flying in the sky, jumping from a plane. Really random, but I think this is because they are not grounded. I think they're sitting, but may be wrong. You just might want to make it a little more clear (sorry). But I really love this piece regardless. It's very funny and tells a story. Is the second piece about students raising their hands so that the teacher wil come up to them so they can check out her boobs? Both pieces are very funny and very Becky. Props, great job (again).
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